Since that night, Harry could not act like he usually could around Hermonie. Her shinning eyes, her firm ass, and lovely attire, was driving him insane. Hermonie had not told anyone else besides Ginny, (Harry and Ginny hook up in the 6th book at the end, lets see how this changes things…) and Harry had not even told Ron his best friend. The ups though, he felt like a Wizard king who could do no wrong but only without Hermonie around. Soon Harry began thinking about doing it again, but the problem was the spell he had used was nowhere to be found. The night he and Hermonie had sex he left it in the commenroom and found it gone when he woke up that morning. Of course, Hermonie was not feeling the littlest of weirdness, she was actually much happier but still feuding with Ron. When Harry saw Ron these days, actually, all he really saw of Ron was his mouth on Lavender browns. So really the only good friend he still had, and she was a GOOD friend, was Hermonie.
Ginny however was really looking at him a lot. While looking up potions for Snape he noticed how she was instead of writing her essay, looking at him. Staring mostly. He looked down at her skirt which had been slowly going higher and higher in response to Ginny pulling it up for him. She had no underwear on as he could see right to her hairless pussy. She quickly put it down if she didn’t realize she had done it and began writing her essay once more. Hermonie was out in the Library looking up books up the Half Blood prince again and Ron was probably out with Lavander leaving Harry to study alone. But today he had wonderful company, of Ginny.
It was now spring and quite warm. The kids who had nothing to do had left and only some 1st years remain along with Harry and Ginny.
Harry notices some of her features too, her lovely red hair was enough to be boner inducing but that was just the tip of her head. She was filling in it looked like and only had maybe B cup tits, but from experience with Hermonie he didn’t car what size they where. She had a face of a angle and when she smiled you felt good too. Her body was well curved and had everything Harry would want to explore. Soon he really wanted that spell. What book he tried to think…what book.
Suddenly he felt as if a heat wave had just gone over him. He felt his penis rapidly becoming hard as if he was about to orgasm right there. It didn’t of course but still he felt the need to masturbate right away. He got up and went to the boy’s room when Ron, Semus, and the other boy would not be. He also noted that Ginny and he would be safe up here. He picked up his bed, and pulled out a magic Vagina. It was a fake but felt real. All you did was stick your dick in it and ask it to suck, fuck, or be a asshole to fuck. He had never tried asshole before and turned it to that. Suddenly the door opened and closed as if the wind had made a mistake blowing it open. He quickly pulled his pants up over his large penis and went to investigate. He felt a presence and wondered if it was a ghost? A invisible clock? Nah he had the only one in the school. Right in his….where was it last he though. He had not used once that winter. Did Ron take it? Hermonie? Semus? Lavander?…GINNY?
He stood there in the closed doorway thinking about it. Who had it? Did he? He walked over to his bag and began searching. Quills, paper, dress robes, and ink where found but no clock…
His heart was racing fast now; someone was here in the room with him. It could be Hermonie, that would be ok but anyone else would be creepy. Harry’s mind raced through faces. It might be Hermonine he thought again, or Cho? Nah she wouldn’t be this desperate.
His thoughts only found Ginny as the culprit. She might know about the cloak from Ron but she might now, better just find out now.
“Hello?” Harry called out, but received no answer.
“Ginny?” Harry tried. And once more there was only silence
Except…
“Yeah Harry?”
This made Harry jump; he jumped and landed on hi bed where he felt a person already there. He turned around and saw a floating Ginny head, he long red hair behind her and lovely eyes staring at him with a sense of wanting.
“Uh, hey Ginny, Where did you get that Cloak?”
“From your dresser of course, Ron told me you had one so I thought I would come in handy.”
“Come in handy for what Ginny?” inquired Harry.
“He-he, well I was going to spy on you…” Ginny said blushing.
“What for???”
“Well, I’ve kinda had a Thing for you since 1st year, and…I’ve been waiting to make a move ever since.”
Harry was astounded at this. Ginny naked on his cock, boobs bouncing and pussy out? How could he have missed this awesome thought? Ginny had one great body, maybe even more appealing then Hermonies great body, but not my much.
And without even letting Harry answer, Ginny lunged at him, the cloak coming off with her. He was pinned down to his own bed, no because she was overpowering him, it was because he was kissing her as they fell. Imminently he dug into her cloths, first taking off her bottoms as he wanted her now. The image of Ginny on his cock was never going to leave his mind.
He soon got her school outfit off and she got his pants off. The nest thing to go was he panties, but she wasn’t even wearing any, that Ginny, always taking chances.
“I knew this was going to happen so I didn’t bother” Ginny explained.
“Good thinking” Harry said, as he flipped Ginny up to sit on his erect cock. She knew what was going to happen and braced. Harry had wondered if she was a Virgin, with all her boyfriends and soon found out she was one. This was very good for Harry. Slowly he put himself on her, entering her pleasure center with ease and wanting, and then encountered resistance. And without waiting for a word from the lips of Beautiful Ginny, he entered.
“OOOOOHHHHH SHIT HaRRy!” Ginny said loudly.
Harry remembered how Hermonie had taken it when she had Sex with Harry about 3 days ago.
Soon Ginny’s pain had subsided and she began wanting Harry to continue.
Harry felt that pure bliss he had felt with Hermonie, he couldn’t think of him now, not with Ron’s sexy sister needing his cock. Wait, Ron’s Sister?! What if Ron finds out? Will he never be able to spend time at the burrow again? That would hurt him as he was now gaining thoughts of were to fuck Ginny at the Burrow. No time now thought, a girl was riding his dick on his bed.
“Uh OHHHHHHH UH OHHHHHHHHHHOOHHHH” Ginny said as she erupted in pleasure from her first organism. Harry wondered if she really had never masturbated before.
Of course she had, that pussy was too good not to touch. Harry looked down at his cock being enveloped by Ginny’s wonderfully tight pussy, the mere thought, let alone image of Ginny doing this act sends him into orgasm mode.
“oh Ginny, oh Ginny, how are you so tight?! Fuck I’m going to cum all in your pussy!” he said loudly, and he did just that. But instead of hearing a voice of approval, he heard a “STOP Harry!”
Ginny then got off of Harry, sweating and he pussy dripping, and told Harry why.
“I want you to fuck my ass Harry; you’re the first man and the only man for me. I want it to be your cock that goes into both my holes.” Said Ginny.
Harry couldn’t be happier, the thought of Ginny’s even tighter Asshole being his pleasure center for his cock was almost enough to cum right there. Though he didn’t, it could have happened. Slowly he got behind her, her pussy shining in the dark room and sexy curves showing to Harry. He was now at the entrance of Ginny’s glorious asshole and begging to go through.
“Just a minunite Harry” said Ginny, she then took out her wand and said “Lobnous!” and Harry’s dick was then coated is a very smooth substance. “Ok Harry, fuck me hard…”
Harry did just that. He began by coxing Ginny’s ass into likening itself being violated and found that Ginny was really enjoying this.
Harry was too now that he was Balls deep in her Ass. Her lube spell really helped and soon she began to shout words of encouragement to fuck harder and never stop. Her ass was now a fucking machine, broken in by none other then the boy who lived.
“Fuck Harry!” Cursed Ginny, as she soon came closer to her inventible orgasm.
“Uhhhhhhhh” Ginny said near a yell now, and Harry wondered why no one had heard her yells yet. He soon didn’t care one bit and began to enter his organism at a surprising speed.
“FUCK” Harry Released, ” I’M FUCKING CUMMMINGGG” Harry yelled but didn’t care.
“ooooooHHHHHHHH” Ginny moaned as she felt Harry’s hot semen come inside her. The knowledge alone made her cum right there, which caused her own juices to mix with Harry’s.
Harry stayed there for a minute, still letting drips of Cum go into Ginny’s ass, she was breathing hard now, and suddenly Harry herd someone coming up the stairs.
“Shit! Shit!” Harry said quite lowly as he demounted Ginny’s wonderful body, “Get Dressed Before they open the door Ginny!”
Ginny then stood up, cum dripping down out of her ass and pointed her wand at the door and said “Recomotios!” Which made the door lock.
“Ginny, Wha-” said Harry as Ginny kissed him, her tongue darted into his mouth and he began to do the same thing.
“Oy! This is my room! Lemme in!” said a voice from outside.
Harry didn’t even flinch as he kissed Ginny, still nude and dripping.
“Semus? You there? Hellllloooo!” Said the voice.
Ginny then let go of Harry’s tongue, Grabbed her cloths and went under the invisibility cloak that Harry’s father had given him. Harry did not dare say a word and began getting his robes back on hastily. He got his robe buttoned up when the door finally opended and in came Ron.
“Oy! Harry, couldent you hear me?”
“No, I was sleeping Ron”
“Then was it you who was doing all the yelling?” inquired ron,
“might have, I had another dream….” Harry lied.
“Oh Harry, you might wanna tell Doubledoor about it, I mean anyone in the commenroom could have heard ya.”
This made Harry’s belly twinge, he had been really loud and people could here. Then something caught his eye, a bit of floating red hair went by Ron’s back and out the door and Harry smiled inside. He really wanted to tell Ron about Hermonie, and now Ginny but, it was Lunch time, no time for telling of sex.
“Anyways” began Harry. Changing the subject, “should we have a bit of lunch then?”
“Yeah, That’s why I came up here in the first place!”
They both went down to the Lunchroom happy but Harry was most pleased.
The END
Author is Vashinred
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goHarry:
this is so good i love this please make more
posted on November 20th, 2007 at 11:05 pm
feelssogood:
i agree please make more i love these
posted on November 20th, 2007 at 11:06 pm
no-body special:
that story was so fucking in depth that it got me hard!!!
posted on December 6th, 2007 at 4:42 am
Ugnugget:
It waz nice
posted on December 10th, 2007 at 10:51 pm
A-non O'mace:
ah. more genius dude plese make more
posted on December 12th, 2007 at 6:00 am
A-non O'mace:
I relize I wrote the last comment but its been like a week since I wrote it. dude if you made like a whole book I would sereously by it. you would have to talk to J.K. first though.
posted on December 15th, 2007 at 9:46 am
BOW CHICA BOW WOW:
GENIUS!!!!
I AGREE WRITE A WHOLE BOOK!!!!!!
I GOT SO HORNY FROM BOTH STORIES AND CAME WHILE READING!!!!
posted on December 15th, 2007 at 11:12 pm
emoguy28:
THIS SO FUCKING GREAT IF ONLY THERE WAS A VIDEO OF IT OR PICTURES TO GO WITH IT NOT THOSE CRAPPY ONES THAT CAME OUT LIKE REAL ONES THAT WOULD BE REALLY GREAT AND THE BOOK IF IT HAD PIC THEN I WOULD 100% BUY IT
posted on December 16th, 2007 at 8:24 pm
KrazyDudE!:
NicE StoRy HoW BoUt HaRry FuCkiNG ChO NexT?
posted on December 28th, 2007 at 4:48 am
emoguy28:
nah CHO IS TOOFUCKING UGLY AND BESIDES DONTU THINK SHE WILL CRY INSTEAD OF CUMMING LIKE “SNIFF, HARRY I CANT CUM IM TOO BUSY CRYING
posted on January 14th, 2008 at 1:55 am
brisdman:
lol dude how do you feel about making porn stories emoguy28?
(Offering job)
posted on January 14th, 2008 at 4:26 am
dakotakill:
this story was awesome! plz put more on.
posted on March 1st, 2008 at 6:25 am
dakotakill:
how about ron and lavender?
posted on March 1st, 2008 at 6:29 am
dakotakill:
how about ron and lavender? it would be different from just harry harry harry
posted on March 1st, 2008 at 6:31 am
unknown:
liked it alot u should really make a book
posted on March 8th, 2008 at 5:13 pm
blaze:
its grt
how about harry & fleur or harry & tonks
posted on March 17th, 2008 at 7:51 am
yomom:
how bout hermonie and ginny with snape for an A
posted on March 18th, 2008 at 3:29 am
Shade:
Nice……. More?
posted on March 19th, 2008 at 1:47 am
underyourlovespell:
loved it mate detailed exciting and keep me reading as i have heard others say write more. next you should write about harry ron semus and nevil gang bangin ginny and luna in which hermonie could be watching in the hall or sumthing along thoughs lines nway kudos loved it and keep up the good work
posted on March 31st, 2008 at 3:57 am
altrd:
He needs to insert these into the books. the books would be more interesting, if your asking me.
posted on April 17th, 2008 at 4:46 am
horny bastard:
how bout ginny hermine & cho 3 some or hermione ginny cho luna lavender & parvati get some lesbian sex in there
posted on April 19th, 2008 at 11:55 pm
bigcock:
you should have Ginny, Hermonine,and Harry fucking next time
posted on May 2nd, 2008 at 4:03 pm
btex:
yeah great story .. how ’bout a lesbian scene between hermonine an ginny
posted on May 5th, 2008 at 1:55 pm
Gerald:
Sucks dude, I mean like half the words were spelled wrong
posted on June 1st, 2008 at 6:53 am
hammerman:
dude the story kicks ass it is the shit
posted on June 5th, 2008 at 8:43 pm
Harry James Potter:
dude, how did you know? me, ginny, hermione, and draco are doing a gangbang on monday, you should write about it!
posted on June 23rd, 2008 at 3:56 am
Dave Davidson:
shit is so cash
posted on July 5th, 2008 at 5:10 pm
james lupin:
fuck yay magonical and dumbldoor
posted on July 9th, 2008 at 5:51 pm
pussy licker:
how about all the hot girls in an orgy!!!
posted on July 10th, 2008 at 3:41 am
haha:
wat a bunch of fucking retards…
get a life
this is so fucking gay
who the fuck would get hard from this ///
write a book??
dude…. your grammar is fucking retarded and your spelling is terrible..
only stupid fucking IGNORANT americans would do shit like this (and actually think its cool…)
wake up u dumb fucks
and go fuck real girls and stop jerking off to harry potter u losers
posted on July 30th, 2008 at 9:40 pm
George Bush:
You are all dead, DEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
posted on August 8th, 2008 at 8:44 pm
joemomma:
dumbledore is gay stupid
posted on August 15th, 2008 at 6:13 am
YoDaDdY:
U should make a lesbian story.
posted on August 20th, 2008 at 8:16 pm
Shayne:
I think you should have Hermione and Ginny.
posted on August 21st, 2008 at 7:36 am
Ninpir68:
Pretty nice u should mak a book ud get rich but u gotta spell da stuff right
posted on September 11th, 2008 at 3:27 pm
secret:
any more?
coz this is really good!
posted on September 11th, 2008 at 8:39 pm
up yours:
i fucking love it\
hell yah
posted on October 22nd, 2008 at 9:13 pm
Deviljin:
It was awsome
posted on October 29th, 2008 at 6:47 am
hentai critic:
your story is ok. ive read better. 1st, your spelling is horrendous. 2nd, you need to go into more detail. detail is what gets you readers. these people who say its gr8, probably dont read a lot. they seem lyk 1st tym readers lukin 4 a jackoff. well gud luck with your next one. email me your next story and tell me if u want me to tell you what i think. email: hentaifreak@hotmail.com.
posted on November 18th, 2008 at 10:34 pm
tiny tit lover:
wtf do u mean organism its orgy or orgasm and for its cum not have an orgasm rite there still pretty good tho but gho through slowly to spell checck
posted on November 23rd, 2008 at 2:39 am
xaviar richards:
this was fuckin great PLEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEE write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
)))))))))))))0
posted on December 1st, 2008 at 11:04 pm
harddick:
that was the hotest shit i have ever read
posted on December 14th, 2008 at 12:52 am
zyvanume:
this is a great little bit, but you need more of a story. a story is what keeps people hooked. details are fairly good, and you have a great linkup with the previous story, but what would be best is if there is some sort of storyline to it.
posted on December 19th, 2008 at 8:26 am
XXXxxxXXX:
Please, Please, please. Send me any more of the Harry Potter stories at jokersayshi@gmail.com. This is the first cite I come to when I’m bored.
posted on January 2nd, 2009 at 4:28 pm
donn boy:
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posted on January 12th, 2009 at 1:28 am
Darklord:
You are fucking good man!!!!!! Forget all these assholes about spelling mistakes
that’s not a prob . What about boltemort fucking belatrix ….dude if u write anymore harry potter porn storys I would like to send them to me or at least inform me where and when u puplish them at darkraikotsios@yahoo.com. I’m begin u dude let me know!!!!!!!!!!!!
posted on January 18th, 2009 at 1:48 pm
the D:
good, but not great, it could use some more adjectives and emotional info., and spell check!
I got hard but no “bang”
posted on January 26th, 2009 at 11:37 pm
bob:
dude you are all fuckin dumb shits for reading this shit go out and get you some real pussy
BITCHES
posted on February 5th, 2009 at 10:27 pm
hpforlife:
definitely not bad… write more and harry and tonks would be good… not bad at all…
posted on February 6th, 2009 at 5:26 am
Devil Harry:
Awsome Make more Igot hard
posted on February 9th, 2009 at 7:41 am
D:
i started a book once, will send if i can find it.
posted on February 19th, 2009 at 12:01 am
strapping young lad:
sweet what if tonks uses the snitch as a dildo?
posted on March 5th, 2009 at 2:18 am
ur mom:
dudes that think we should get real pussy should stop reading these themselves
posted on March 10th, 2009 at 7:36 am
diana:
U should make 1 with hermione, harry, ginny having a threesome…. but dis 1 waz g00d
posted on March 14th, 2009 at 5:48 pm
axel:
bad ass right but look mate this shit is to good to be free and to the ignorant wankers who say that we sure get girls if we wanted to toss our wallet out the fucking window then we would have gf fucking jerk offs
posted on March 19th, 2009 at 8:55 am
jhjhj:
gay
posted on March 23rd, 2009 at 9:32 am
rock:
whats wrong bob you pissed off because your a batterry operated boyfreind whos never seen a pussy
posted on April 4th, 2009 at 6:57 am
achmed:
pathetic rubbish and lame
posted on April 15th, 2009 at 10:40 am
Sylar:
Enough with the freaking negative comments! If you’d like to say something that would be helpful, go ahead. But saying that it’s gay and that we should get some pussy is getting pretty freaking old. If you hate these stories sso much, STOP READING THEM. But enough with the fake “I fuck 5 times a day” attitude. I bet that most of you have never even seen a pussy, much less fucked one. Now do us all a favor and stop posting!
Btw, i thought your story was great. You should definately write more!
posted on April 21st, 2009 at 7:21 am
Aramil:
Wow. Nice post, Sylar. I completely agree! Bravo to you, my friend. Bravo to you.
And to all you lame-asses who won’t stop posting negative comments, fuck off!
posted on April 22nd, 2009 at 6:03 am
ginny secert lover:
could you write one where ron and herminey get caught at the burrow by fred and/or george who then join in to finish her off
posted on April 29th, 2009 at 3:07 am
ginny secert lover:
this one is prettygood by the way
some mistakes, but hey were only alien
posted on April 29th, 2009 at 3:08 am
girl fucker:
u should have the stories have more sex send me some more @ ethannguyen98@hotmail.com
posted on May 7th, 2009 at 12:24 am
Jack:
Fucking awesomeeee,
:D:D:D
Make more(Y)
posted on May 24th, 2009 at 2:10 pm
achmed:
sylar the guy who writes them wants comments negative or posotive so dont tell us not to post negative comments but i agrree with the bit about talking about your fake sex life that is a good comment and amaril your post aint helpful either
posted on May 30th, 2009 at 12:19 pm
Vagabond:
Oh man, invisible clock made me cum.
posted on May 30th, 2009 at 2:25 pm
Walter:
wOW!!!! How the hell do you come up with these? Make more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
posted on June 2nd, 2009 at 6:16 am
=]:
this is fkn awsom!hope u make more!=)
posted on June 2nd, 2009 at 9:28 pm
=]:
i love ginny,shes sooooooooooooooo sexy!
posted on June 2nd, 2009 at 9:29 pm
ciaran:
that was awesome!
i think i have an eiffel tower in my pants!!
posted on July 5th, 2009 at 9:59 pm
eagleye93:
right more this is really dam good
posted on July 8th, 2009 at 2:30 am
eagleye93:
this was really good right some more please
posted on July 8th, 2009 at 2:53 am
You suck:
Wtf? Doubledoor? And you still can’t spell Hermione, this is just stupid..
posted on July 12th, 2009 at 11:45 pm
jack:
if you make a book of this you need to make a new school but with all girls being hot sluts and different people
posted on July 27th, 2009 at 4:02 pm
jack:
this should really be made into a movie,
“Sex At Hogwarts”
posted on July 27th, 2009 at 4:08 pm
fuckyouachmed:
fuck you achmed fuck you bob and fuck you haha you r faggots
posted on July 28th, 2009 at 10:57 pm
frosty_cock:
dude great story make a book please! this is amazing. and btw i just saw the new movie and bonnie wright(ginny weasley) is so fucking hot. who agrees?
posted on July 29th, 2009 at 8:16 am
achmed:
to the guy who told me to fuck of no you have no write and i have considered it again about the story you should spell check and occasionaly you repeat unimportant stuff but otherwise it was ok
posted on July 30th, 2009 at 11:12 am
Fuck Fuck Harry:
damn this is some good shit!!!XD
posted on August 1st, 2009 at 11:50 pm
clen:
ok make it have ginny and hermimie thats good idea and mabey ad luna.
posted on August 4th, 2009 at 7:10 am
clen:
achemd how u so nice now u were an ass before and every one cused u out so y so nice to this guy but not other hmmmmm.
posted on August 4th, 2009 at 7:12 am
Field Marshal Saberclaw to Sallranse:
Still being an ass if ya ask me. Man puts up something to be enjoyed and gets has grammar trashed. If that’s all ya can think to say then shut up. I think the stories are great and I’d like to see more in the future. Keep up the good work man! Oh and if ya could send some to me e-mail that’d be awsome. General_Saberclaw@ymail.com
posted on August 6th, 2009 at 8:50 am
Dazman:
FUCKIN AWSOME! Forget spelling who needs it?? I love how you spelled it Doubledoor, SOOOOO funny laughed my fucking ass off lol. But who cares =D Keep up the good work!!
posted on August 6th, 2009 at 2:53 pm
click:
picnics coziness cot courses Italy save heroism longs Icelandic?
posted on August 26th, 2009 at 1:15 pm
D::
It sucks idiots.
posted on September 7th, 2009 at 10:12 pm
D::
You shouldnt be writing at all.
posted on September 7th, 2009 at 10:15 pm
D::
You suck.
posted on September 7th, 2009 at 10:16 pm
Reaper944:
Dude you are really good at makeing theses story make more they are great
posted on September 10th, 2009 at 11:02 pm
grim666:
(clap)(clap)(clap) AWSOME genius make more all I have to say
posted on September 15th, 2009 at 1:43 am
me:
vashinred dude u really got to learn how to spell…
Doubledoor???
Harry got an organism???
Its almost pathetic you do write great stories though
posted on September 15th, 2009 at 9:24 pm
wackojackop:
this was good and how would the negative dickheads know what to say if they havent read it themselves fucking hippocrates i think you should do one with hermione harry draco and ginny
posted on September 20th, 2009 at 1:03 am
george:
dudes stop with all of the negative comments it just shows that you hav nothing bettr to. great story but just try spell check
posted on September 21st, 2009 at 2:23 am
Deacon:
To Wackojakop
Sorry, what is a Hippocrates? Is that like A crate shaped hippo? Or are you just a retard?
To OP
Sorry, but you can’t spell or use proper grammar.
posted on October 16th, 2009 at 10:34 pm
Deacon:
P.S LOLOLOL NERDES I HAVE LIKE 5 GIRLFRIENDS AND I R LIEK SO COOL. GET A PUSSY LOLOLOL. /sarcasm
posted on October 16th, 2009 at 10:37 pm
omg:
WTF man get some fucking spelling classes and then write stories fuck man you could at least spell shit right
posted on October 25th, 2009 at 8:47 pm
:):
omg awesome dude make more this is fucking sweet i love reading these!
posted on October 30th, 2009 at 1:15 am
horney:
great story whos heard of full metal alchemist cos im writing one on full metal alchemist p s write more
posted on November 15th, 2009 at 10:44 pm
fuck me:
make one with ginny and hermione
hahha that would be awesome
thx
posted on December 17th, 2009 at 1:28 am
big load:
damn. this story was hot. like previous posts’ you seriously need to work on your grammar and add more details. nice story though.
posted on January 4th, 2010 at 9:31 am
GiGiddy:
it was awsome but wish their were pictures
posted on January 22nd, 2010 at 5:53 am
Illusion:
Nice story, but grammar mistakes are distracting-they make the story less appealing. Could use some detail too.
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I`m not negative, I tell it like it is. So deal already!
posted on January 24th, 2010 at 10:25 am
ramdomness:
very nice spelling was a little off but who cares.
to all you fuckers who are talking about your fake sex lives, i would like you 2 know that i have probably seen more pussy than u and im only fucking 13, so go take a flying fuck off a bridge.
posted on January 31st, 2010 at 10:25 am
ramdomness:
p.s. u should have one with firenze or however the hell u spell his name and hermione or something.
posted on January 31st, 2010 at 10:26 am
mr. jizz:
it waz fucking awsome it made me jizz
posted on February 6th, 2010 at 5:24 am
Master Baiter:
Awesomeness… however those damn invisable clocks suck… I can never tell what time it is… lol…
posted on February 26th, 2010 at 8:43 am
Master Baiter:
also… Randomness… shut your underage mouth we all know you’re a little virgin SO SHUT THE FRAK UP!!!!
posted on February 26th, 2010 at 8:47 am
harrypotter:
ah… you should make one about harry and fleur, and make it longer dude. and then Ron came in and said “OY HARRY….harry? *opens door* BLOODY HELL what r u doing harry?” *sees fleur* “BLOODY HEYY” <>
posted on March 2nd, 2010 at 8:50 pm
harrypotter:
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posted on March 2nd, 2010 at 8:51 pm
harrypotter:
*faints*
posted on March 2nd, 2010 at 8:51 pm
Bitchslap:
You all are fucking fat fags with no life so go fuck a women like yo mama you’ve already been in her vagina
posted on March 5th, 2010 at 12:53 am
Mr. Helpful:
Good: Nice plot, fairly detailed, and better than a lot of other stories. Bad: Kinda short, bad grammer and spelling, and not the best written story ever. P.S. ATTENTION ALL RETARDS! DONT DIS US BECAUSE YOU’RE A POOR LOSER! AND IF YOU’RE GOING TO COMPLAIN ABOUT SPELLING SPELL YOUR COMMENT CORRECTLY! . Mr. Helpful signing off!
posted on March 11th, 2010 at 9:42 pm
Mr. Helpful:
P.P.S Leave the poor fucking retards alone! It’s not like they can help their unnaturally low IQ’s! OR the fact that they will remain a virgin for their entire poor miserable lives. P.P.P.S How would you (THE RETARDS) find this story unless you were actively looking for it, and if you’re searching the internet just to insult people with lame insults you are even lower than I thought you were and that is lower than you say we are. I apologize to anyone who was giving REASONABLE criticism, you are NOT retarded. . Mr Helpful signing off!
posted on March 11th, 2010 at 9:53 pm
Horney:
i agree with mr helpful i know a retard and he is one of the most awsome guys i’ve met and also the people who are saying get a life why are you reading these stories if ur saying to evryone else reading them and saying great things about them to get a life doesn’t that mean you don’t have a life as well? and ps well done dude make more its awsome and don’t let spelling get to you in my opinion spelling doesn’t matter. pps thanks for the great story
posted on March 29th, 2010 at 10:35 pm
Horney:
ps do you negative people wake up in the morning and go “i know i’ll be a dick on the comments on some porn website today”
posted on March 29th, 2010 at 10:37 pm
fuckyeah:
you really need to learn how to spell, but other than that, it was good
posted on April 12th, 2010 at 10:10 pm
Asakura Hao:
Why not have one with Hermione,Ginny and Luna fucking Harry at one shot?
posted on June 5th, 2010 at 6:55 am
the reaper:
it was a good story make more
posted on June 19th, 2010 at 5:00 am
Ergd:
HOLLY FUCKING SHIT THAT WAS GOOD
posted on July 15th, 2010 at 7:00 am
Harginher Potweagra:
omg you should do one where ron accidentally sets a sticking charm on Hermione and Ginny and Hermione ‘accidentally’ touches Ginny’s ass, then Ginny grabs her ass ‘accidentally’. The only way to get rid of the curse is if they are both fucked. Ron refuses, so Harry’s the one to fuck them.
or u can do a sequel of the one you made
good work, friend
posted on July 22nd, 2010 at 5:03 am
harry:
dude, you should really write a stort about harry fucking fleur. just check your spelling and write more details:)
posted on July 27th, 2010 at 8:53 pm
gay boy:
what about making one of harry and dean fuking each other for exanple… it was one cold winter afternoonand everyone was at hogsmead harry was in the common room doing his potions essay thatharry had to finish to hand in that evening or get detention, he was siting in one of thechirs next to a window on the desk a book lay open and harry was triying to read it but a grup of 2nd years where been really noisy so decided tofinish it in his dormitory,when he opend the dormitory door he say dean liying on his
posted on August 22nd, 2010 at 3:03 am
dude:
Mmmpf…Pretty good. A few spelling mistakes here and there, but not enough to spoil the whole thing XD.
The actors and actresses could make MILLIONS from the porn industry XD.
posted on September 2nd, 2010 at 11:38 am
assfucker9000:
you should have harry in a 5 way with lunna,hermione,ginny,and cho ……harry fucking ginny eating out cho and fingering hermione&lunna that would be AWESOME!!!!!!!!!
posted on October 9th, 2010 at 9:16 pm
luv dis story!!!!!!!!!!!!:
how bout a lesbian 3-way with ginny,hermonie,and luna
posted on November 19th, 2010 at 5:10 am
mr. jizz:
fuck i jerked off it was so fuckin hot
posted on November 21st, 2010 at 3:06 am
Sanity:
A good idea, but poorly executed. Try lengthening it, checking your spelling/grammar, and mixing it up a bit. Don’t be afraid to get detailed and exotic; instead of Harry thrusting mindlessly until he cums, have him, say, bite into Ginny’s shoulder, bury his face in her breasts, sensually stroke her body, etc.
Now, I’m off to the grocery store to buy a magical pussy and an invisible clock.
posted on November 25th, 2010 at 10:13 am
fuckin idiots:
good story and to those people that say get a life ur fuckin idiots why u lookin this up if u dont wanna read it just dont get on the fuckin internet
posted on December 5th, 2010 at 9:17 am
fuckin idiots:
ps no offence to everybody else
posted on December 5th, 2010 at 9:19 am
9(^^^):
that was awesome
posted on January 16th, 2011 at 7:31 pm
urgayifureadthis:
lol 130 lifeless fags
posted on February 20th, 2011 at 7:39 am
aragon:
i fucking agree with KrazyDude let Harry fuck cho we all know that he wants to fuck her
posted on March 6th, 2011 at 5:24 am
joe:
i dont understand why harry would need to fuck 3 diffrint girls
posted on March 10th, 2011 at 9:14 pm
the man:
i jizzed
ginny sounded so sexy
posted on March 10th, 2011 at 9:15 pm
djfuck35:
This was a good TWO THINGS I HATE
FUCKIN WORDS MISPELLED
GRAMMAR IS HORRIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
posted on May 3rd, 2011 at 2:45 am
Zak:
Ok this wasfuking hot but maybe rons sister and heromine in lesbeian sex?
posted on July 16th, 2011 at 3:17 am
jonatan:
bedimoder perbertidos inutiles ijos de puta
posted on July 20th, 2011 at 12:24 pm
GGreat:
I came…
posted on August 21st, 2011 at 4:45 am
GGreat:
lol the ine who said 130 lifeless fags was 130eth!!! LOL:D
posted on August 21st, 2011 at 4:47 am
GGreat:
i meen one
posted on August 21st, 2011 at 4:48 am
harry potter:
so wright some more
posted on November 18th, 2011 at 2:34 am
spider pig:
make harry potter story 3 NOW!
posted on November 18th, 2011 at 3:43 am
spider pig:
make harry potter porn story 3 NOW!
posted on November 18th, 2011 at 3:54 am
banking online a:
AMAZING!!! Dieter gave him a good run for the money!!
posted on December 2nd, 2011 at 9:16 pm
Fryshfyg:
Learn how to spell.
posted on December 16th, 2011 at 6:22 am
yummy food:
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posted on March 3rd, 2012 at 4:25 pm
Magali Dimascio:
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posted on March 18th, 2012 at 2:51 am