Comments on: Pokemon Breeding Center. Part IV.

By: wth??

wth?? — Fri, 28 Nov 2008 17:50:09 +0000

the fuck?
this is sick-ass man..
DONT write about rape..

By: altrd8

altrd8 — Fri, 26 Sep 2008 04:33:41 +0000

you are a great writer if i had half the imagination that you did i would be happy you are a good writer and keep writing what you do you are fine there are lots of rapes happening even as we speak people are getting pissed because they don’t think it is right, i don’t ether but it is still part of life and if they don’t like it don’t post it they are being dicks to a great writer like your self i mean some is a little weird but still you write what you want to don’t let other people make you story ideas for you you do or write what you want do

I liked the story but just tone down the rape stuff to stay on peoples good side or ride the fence in other word

you are a great writer i suck at it so i respect that

By: the fuck?

the fuck? — Sun, 14 Sep 2008 06:08:56 +0000

I can’t believe that so many of you find this “prose” erogenous. Rape is never a good thing, nor should it be a subject of sexual pleasure! You are a disgrace to writers and authors everywhere, not to mention whatever Pokemon fans that may still be left. I hope your soul finds peace with whatever you pray to. It sure won’t with me.

By: hellsnotsohot

hellsnotsohot — Thu, 04 Sep 2008 17:20:18 +0000

YO ignore the negtive posts dude i FUCKING LOVED IT this is the only real pokemon action shit online fuck humans they are worthless (yes is to am worthless and pray every day for death and release from this never ending disease known as life) I WILL FUCKING PAY U TO WRITE MORE.

You will never get out cause you were never alive…

By: Frieza Slayer

Frieza Slayer — Sun, 13 Jul 2008 09:43:09 +0000

I’d like to read what you write next!

By: Frieza Slayer

Frieza Slayer — Sun, 13 Jul 2008 09:42:42 +0000

Here is a topic for the next one.
Crystal is traveling by herself after getting Rhydon and Machamp from the Day Care but gets lonely in the forest at night…

By: Sasquatch

Sasquatch — Sun, 13 Jul 2008 09:38:44 +0000

I agree with Helio on the evolution thing. Just one thing though, WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU MAN!!! I am sure most people were big fans of Poke’mon and that some still are but these four are just sickening! Rape isn’t cool man!

By: gamero

gamero — Thu, 10 Jul 2008 08:49:18 +0000

nice man pure brilliance

By: Helio

Helio — Fri, 04 Jul 2008 07:46:38 +0000

Dude,why dont u make Eevee evolve into Espeon,like her mother,so she can get revenge on Machamp and Rhydon,by using Psychic and forcing Machamp and Rhydon to
fuck themselves?
But I liked the story

By: rendor

rendor — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 13:55:49 +0000

dude u need to write more u HAVE 2

By: Mitchell

Mitchell — Mon, 19 May 2008 09:22:10 +0000

ive read this story like 5 times and i still havent lost interest i want mooooore soon your fans are waiting \,,/^.^\,,/

By: C.E.N.

C.E.N. — Sun, 04 May 2008 13:44:11 +0000

Rape, pretty or not happens. Strength is an attractive quality, rape victims can be both turned on, disgusted, sickened, or they may ‘learn’ to accept and enjoy it. Another thing. Also, raping another would give a sense of addicting pleasure just for the power it shows you have. I say this is among the great fanfics. I enjoy being shocked and gripped at the same time. Honestly, it was a bit much for me, and that’s why I loved it.

Keep doing what makes you, you, and to hell with people who don’t understand that dark thoughts are as big a part in stories as hopes and dreams.

… By the way, if he turns the ending into a Machamp really loves her, and she really loves him crap, wouldn’t that be even more sickening?

By: pussycat456

pussycat456 — Sun, 04 May 2008 06:58:50 +0000

omfg! that made me cum. how about the next pokemon are charizard and blazekin. that would be fuckin delicous.

By: Rednek4life

Rednek4life — Wed, 09 Apr 2008 00:51:15 +0000

Hey dude. Just writing to say that I don’t think rape is a cool thing to write about. Just so you know this isn’t an angry letter. I just wanted to inform you that most of us don’t like this kind of stuff. I think that I speak for all these guys when I say that you are a great writer, with great imagery and an awesome imagination. But please just make some stories that don’t involve rape. Im totally cool with the pokemon thing, just make it enjoyable for Evee. And maby have someone kick the shit outta Machamp and Rhydon, all your fans would enjoy that.

By: blaze

blaze — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 22:58:57 +0000

it was a little wierd cuz it was rape but i liked it lol