Comments on: Quality Time

By: Blackcard_Ace

Blackcard_Ace — Thu, 02 Oct 2008 07:48:47 +0000

@ all repliers:

Thank you for the commends… and of course.. like Nawt Anon O’mace said, I’m european. That is also an point that some of the characters have a different or slight changed name.

Example: Buster…. is called in the translated show as Boris.

Well nevermind…. to the grammar. Sure there are mistakes and of course some sentences don’t make much sense but I try my best. Normaly I let someone re-read it for that fact…

Like i mentioned in the other thread.. I will mcome up with more stuff when i find the time… but life isn’t much fair to me… and i have a few projects that have to be done.

@ secret:
There is something around… okay it is not finished but set up on the original site of mine under the wooec authors. Don’t know how it made it’s way into publish, but I will try to bring it to an end…

So stay tooned and may have a nice cup of tea, or like I prefere have a good beer XD

So long BCA

By: secret

secret — Sun, 14 Sep 2008 01:43:00 +0000

plezz i beg you Blackcard Ace write some more like that!

some of the writers in this site allways writes gay stuff! i know Blackcard Ace does not and thats whay he is the best auther!

By: secret

secret — Sun, 14 Sep 2008 01:19:18 +0000

this is just too good.

i am starting to be a fan of your stories!

is there going to b a number 3?

By: Amy

Amy — Tue, 26 Aug 2008 16:06:42 +0000

TOTAL HILLBILLIES lmao

By: Amy

Amy — Tue, 26 Aug 2008 16:05:06 +0000

if you wanted to make sense out of this arthur will behis mothers husband and his sisters boyfriend. and then the would end end up on the springer show…:)

By: Amy

Amy — Mon, 25 Aug 2008 06:56:21 +0000

it was awsome write more get muffy and francine into it.

By: youngj.

youngj. — Fri, 15 Aug 2008 03:19:30 +0000

it was really gay.. i diddnt like it one bit.

By: altrd

altrd — Thu, 17 Apr 2008 04:27:14 +0000

Ya I liked it but i didn’t see the mistakes till after I read the second time. it was a tad long if you ask me, but other wise it was good.

By: Miss Megan

Miss Megan — Fri, 04 Apr 2008 15:05:10 +0000

Yeah it’s a pity they weren’t a touch older, but over all qutie a good tale.

By: shadowboi

shadowboi — Fri, 01 Feb 2008 06:17:36 +0000

its dora winafrit

By: Norwegian

Norwegian — Wed, 23 Jan 2008 07:29:21 +0000

Personally i did not fond the grammer errors distracting, and i did feel a tad guilty about the fact that they are children(exepct for mom), but i enjoyed it.

By: willard

willard — Mon, 14 Jan 2008 05:27:44 +0000

i love the story i like the part about d.w and jane but i did not read the rest of the story

By: bob

bob — Sun, 06 Jan 2008 12:02:38 +0000

yeah i think they had a little trouble writing this story in english maybe it was a translation problem either way very good story overall it was very well done if you can get past the grammar issues (which are kind of distracting)

By: Nawt Anon O'mace

Nawt Anon O'mace — Tue, 25 Dec 2007 09:26:04 +0000

@A-non O’mace…
I think the writer does not fully grasp the english language… possibly from a european country.
If anyone is having trouble reading it just leave some contact info and I’ll probably send you a version where the english is cleaned up and is not distrating from the overall flow of the creative writing.

By: A-non O'mace

A-non O'mace — Sat, 15 Dec 2007 10:48:47 +0000

I got off but I kinda felt guilty about it.I would like to see another but first 2 words dude “spell check”